tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1954811040366122923.post4006389339160749581..comments2023-10-15T06:03:19.974-04:00Comments on Tea & Biscuits: Teaser Tuesday: We're in trouble nowCaitlin R. O'Connellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10783453696462112780noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1954811040366122923.post-37927194244381175262010-12-29T00:40:35.107-05:002010-12-29T00:40:35.107-05:00Wow, Caitlin, I am so impressed. The Reign of Terr...Wow, Caitlin, I am so impressed. The Reign of Terror is one of the focal points of my major (Robespierre and the French Revolution, woo!), and you've captured it so well in such this little snippet. <br /><br />4th's time the charm. Happy new year! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01445416054945632135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1954811040366122923.post-48965028420505138892010-12-28T21:42:52.131-05:002010-12-28T21:42:52.131-05:00Thank you! And whoops, I'll go fix that spelli...Thank you! And whoops, I'll go fix that spelling mistake, thanks for catching that...<br /><br />Glad you enjoyed it!Caitlin R. O'Connellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10783453696462112780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1954811040366122923.post-31492114988682739962010-12-28T17:29:17.298-05:002010-12-28T17:29:17.298-05:00Well, I enjoyed it. :) I haven't read the othe...Well, I enjoyed it. :) I haven't read the other versions, so I can't compare, but I like the tone and the voice. Also clear here is the driving force for the main character (assuming that's Rose), at least for the first part of the book.<br /><br />Question: How is Avar recognized as a werewolf?<br /><br />I suggest having Avar hold his hand over her mouth to silence Rose, <em>especially</em> because she then pokes around to look. Would he take even the smallest chance that she would cry out?<br /><br />Also, wearabouts should be whereabouts.<br /><br />Thanks so much for sharing! And good luck with this revisioning.Andrew Kozmahttp://www.kozma.curragh-labs.org/blog/noreply@blogger.com