So since productivity has not been my middle name of late, I thought I'd show you the opening paragraphs of A Bridge to War. After all, opening lines are important. Would these catch your eye if you were browsing in a bookstore?
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I like the intrigue this sets up - a world where werewolves are well known and people joke about them. You have me intrigued and I'd probably read on. :0
ReplyDeleteOoh, I like it! I love how easily the concept of werewolves fits into 1789 Paris, and as ever I love the atmosphere of the story!
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing! I would definitely read on :D Still loving your historical fiction stuff! It's so darned good!
ReplyDeleteOh, I think I read this in FNW? Hooked me then and hooks me now. Love it! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments, everyone!
ReplyDelete"Rose flinched as the needle poked into her finger and dropped the shirt she was mending."
ReplyDeleteBetter this way:
"Rose flinched and dropped the shirt she was mending as the needle poked into her finger."
It sounds less like the needle dropped the shirt.
Love,
Anonymous