Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Teaser Tuesday: Laundry Day

Guess who finished another chapter this weekend?

Yes! Me!!! *is very excited*

I also think I've worked out what the plot is (I hope). It's entirely character-driven, though, so that might be a problem...

Anyway, I've been trying to give little tidbits of what Rose's life was like before she got kidnapped by werewolves, but I don't really want to expressly say. I'm hoping that little pieces like this will weave together and create the whole picture without my expressly saying exactly what her life was like.

I hope it's working.




  1. You have a very lovely way of writing. I was intrigued the whole way through.

  2. Have I told you lately how awesome the name Avar is? So badass!

    Also, poor Rose! Talk about opression within opression. At least she has something to pass the time with now?

  3. Ah, those last two lines just kill me! Poor Rose...and I, too, am head over feet in love with the name Avar! Great snip!

  4. Awww, poor Rose! I absolutely love the feel of this piece, so beautiful!

  5. The image of the laundry is so vividly done. Nice tease!

  6. Ohh this is a really interesting bit into her life! And it does certainly work! Love it! :D

  7. The idea of Avar as a badass amuses me greatly, since he's actually turning out to be something of a wuss in this version. :)

    Thanks for the loverly comments, everyone!