Showing posts with label French Revolution. Show all posts
Showing posts with label French Revolution. Show all posts

Monday, February 4, 2013

Blind Speed Dating Writing Contest!!

So, this week's post comes to you a day early, because I am a part of Cupid's Literary Connection Blind Speed Dating contest!!! I am already in the agent round, so this post is for HONORABLE MENTION ONLY, but I thought I'd also enter the kissing scene competition portion of the contest because, you know, kissing scenes are fun.

So here is the kissing scene from my manuscript A TERROR OF DARKNESS. Avar, a werewolf, has just helped chase off some Parisian guards who want to arrest Rose and, well, chop her head off (this is the Reign of Terror, after all). Enjoy!

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“You saved my life,” she breathed. He grinned at her.

“You seem so surprised.”               
                                                                                        
Rose could not stop herself smiling; her breaths became short, giddy laughs. He was there, standing in front of her with that silly smirk on his face, there, solid, real, when she thought she would never see him again.

“You came back.”

“I came back,” he repeated with a nod. “I-”

He broke off, dropping his eyes for a moment, and when he looked up again he stepped in towards her, raising a hand to brush her tousled hair away from her face. 

“I finally found someone I could never run from,” he said. 

Words Rose could not say caught in her throat, tangled in surprise and wonder and something she could not define.  His hand, still resting gently against her cheek, tilted her face towards his, and he kissed her. 

At first, his lips were feather light and hesitant on hers, and for a moment Rose was convinced that she had never woken from those fevered and unattainable dreams. But no, it was real, beautiful in its impossibility, and her hands found his shoulders, pulling him closer to her. The cold, tight feeling that had lodged her chest after he had gone melted in an instant, chased away by his hand at her waist, his fingers in her hair. Rose gave herself up entirely to that moment, that kiss, letting everything else slide away, except the thought that for once in her life someone needed her as much as she needed him. 

Avar pulled away, letting Rose catch her breath, but she felt even more giddy with every fresh gasp of air. He looked guilty, but she could not stop smiling, hardly able to believe the strange and wonderful thing that had just happened. 

“I’m sorry,” he said, “I should not have presumed – we are – different, we cannot-”

Rose shook her head, silencing him. 

“None of that matters,” she said, her face an inch from his. “Remember? We are not so very different, you and I.”

And she reached up and kissed him again, his arms wrapping securely around her. None of that mattered; their differences were imaginary, and no one could tell her otherwise, not anymore, not ever, and especially not in that quiet little alleyway, a deserted street at the heart of Paris. Just then, for those silent, stolen moments, they were all that mattered, the only two players in a perfect and precarious world of lovely dreams.

Wednesday, March 28, 2012

Thoughts from Places: Lots of Geeking Out

So my internet is being an entirely new brand of cranky right now; hopefully I'll be able to slap this post online tomorrow morning before I start my work for the day.

Our journey to Paris, naturally, started at an ungodly hour of the morning. We all got up, grumbling, scrambling around and blinking in the too-early, too-bright lights in our flat, getting dressed and throwing toothbrushes into already packed suitcases before heading out the door to the tube, King's Cross, and then the Eurostar. I now know, from the journey home, that the Chunnel is rather unexciting - it's simply twenty minutes of dark, rather than the flat fields of France or the rolling hills of England - but on the way there, I slept through just about everything, which was probably a good thing, as two very full days were ahead of me.

If any of you are ever planning to go to Paris, do yourself a favor - spend more than two days there. I loved it there, and it's on top of my list of places to return to when I'm rich and famous (ha) someday. (The second is Venice, during Carnival.) We did an awful lot, as you shall see, but there's certainly more that I would have liked to see, given the chance.

Once we had arrived in Paris, found the hostel, and dropped off our bags, my French Revolution professor took us back onto the Metro and we began our French Revolution walk, starting, naturally, at the Place de la Bastille. We saw, among other things, the site of La Force prison and the oldest cafe in Paris and the Conciergerie and Notre Dame and the Palais Royale. The Conciergerie and Notre Dame especially were the first of many instances in Paris where I was utterly overwhelmed with amazement at the simple fact that I was standing where I was and seeing what I was seeing. I've done so much research and written so much about the Conciergerie, and there I was, standing right in front of it. I've seen so many pictures of and read books about Notre Dame, and there I was walking through it; I even touched one of the many Gothic columns. (That's one thing I like about old architechture; it feels like walking inside a work of art, and yet you can reach out and touch it to remind ! !yourself that it's real, that someone once made the thing you are marveling at.) In simpler terms: I did an awful lot of geeking out in Paris.

After the walk, we returned to the hostel to check in properly and put our things in our room; we were quite pleased to find that there was a lot of floorspace (more on that later) and that our beds each had curtains on them, rather like sleeper cars in a train. It felt very fancy.

Lisa and I then had a snack (mmm, Croque Monsieur), and then a group of us headed back to the Metro (the Metro, by the way, is very efficient and very easy to use, but feels a bit like people have been put onto a train, and then the train placed in a box, and then the box shaken by a very eager small child) to go to the Louvre, which is free for under-26s on Friday nights (the student discounts in Paris, by the way, are epic). We of course went right to the Mona Lisa - we were, after all, there, and could hardly pass it up - and then we spent another few hours wandering around the Greek and Roman statues and the Egyptian section before our feet decided they had had quite enough. We stopped for some dessert (mmmm, chocolate mousse), and then attempted to complete our plan for the evening, but we quickly discovered that while the Eiffel Tower LOOKS like it is quite close to the Louvre, it most definitely is NOT close, and as we were quite certain we would not make it all the w! !ay there before the last elevator at 10:30, we went back to the hostel and collapsed for the night.

The next morning, Lisa, Tory and I were joined by our friend Bonnie, and the four of us jam-packed our day. We started off with a visit to the Catacombs; after having a bit of difficulty initially finding the entrance, we descended the twenty-six meter spiral staircase (with every step, I gained a new appreciation for just how much my characters must hate me for putting them through that) and headed off into the dark tunnels. There is quite a long walk in the tunnels to get to the actual ossuary, but that was fine with me; the whole time, I was taking mental notes, glad to see that I'd gotten the approximate size and general feel of the tunnels right, telling myself that I ought to write the dampness of the air down there into my manuscript, and again thinking that Rose must hate me so very much for making her walk down there without any light. Finally, we reached the entrance to the catacombs themselves (I might have freaked out a bit upon seeing the "Arrete! C'est ici l'em! !pire de la mort" sign over the entranceway; I asked the others if it was morbid of me to think of the catacombs as one of those places where I could hardly believe I was actually there, and some other American tourists seemed to get a kick out of that. Hopefully they also heard the impromptu history lesson on the catacombs that I gave, so they know I'm not a complete weirdo... just a little bit of a weirdo). The catacombs are kind of unreal. I almost could not process what I was seeing as anything other than, say, a movie set. I could not believe that there were really six million skeletons all arranged down there, and that six million skulls were watching me as I walked past them. The bones go on forever, with the skulls sometimes arranged into hearts or crosses, with plaques on some pillars or propped up by more skulls explaining where the bones had originally been buried or presenting a quotation on the nature of death. It was extremely eerie, but absolutely fascinating.! !

After the catacombs, we stopped for lunch (because seeing six million dead bodies naturally makes you hungry, right?) and then we headed off to the next stop on our itinerary - the Opera Garnier. There, of course, I geeked out quite a bit more, although I refrained from the impromptu history lesson this time. I was thrilled by this place not because I had written about it, but of course because Phantom of the Opera is one of my favorite musicals, and there I was, in the Phantom's opera house, looking at the real chandelier and the real Box 5. The building is stunningly beautiful, with every hallway filled with chandeliers and mirrors and gilt woodwork. I could easily have spent hours there poring over every room, wishing we could have visited the cellars, and imagining Faust being performed on the stage or the staircase filled with people at the Masquerade.

We had to be off to our next stop, however; we went back to the Ile-de-la-Cite, crossing the Pont Neuf and walking alongside the Conciergerie (which was sadly covered in scaffolding) to stop in at Shakespeare and Company, a really neat English-language bookstore across the street from Notre Dame. It was a really neat little shop, if a bit crowded for its size, and I had a good time poking around before we got back on the Metro for our last stop of the day - the Eiffel Tower.

The Eiffel Tower involved an awful lot of standing in line - first, there was the line for the tickets, and then the line for the elevator to the second floor, and then the elevator all the way to the top, and then again for both elevators on the way down - and while the weather was sunny and gorgeous on our first day in Paris, it was cold and a bit drizzly that evening while we were standing beneath the tower and waiting. I do think however that the view from the top, the way that the rain looked like golden glitter in the lights on the tower on the way down, and the fact that I can in fact say that I've been to the top of the Eiffel Tower all made the long lines worth it.

We left Paris late enough the next morning that I was able to stay awake on the train, but early enough that we couldn't really do anything much other than visit a boulangerie. Even though every time I return to London from an adventure, it feels more and more like home, I definitely felt that I had not had quite enough time in Paris, and I will definitely be going back there someday.

Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Book Review: Jennifer Donnelly, Historical Fiction Writer Extraordinaire

So I don't think I actually gushed to you guys about my love for this book:



In any case, REVOLUTION is an absolutely amazing French Revolution story. Jennifer Donnelly truly has a gift for weaving multiple stories together, and this is one of those few "modern-day character falls back into the past" stories that does not make me scoff a bit. She makes it work. And both of the protagonists in REVOLUTION, the one in modern-day and the one in 1795, are both written in such a beautifully tragic way. They are both so broken, but it comes across as poignant rather than whiny.

The other day, I just finished A NORTHERN LIGHT, Donnelly's first YA novel.



Good God, but can she write historical fiction. This book also displays Donnelly's amazing talent for weaving together seemingly disparate stories, in this case the real letters of Grace Brown, who was murdered in 1906 in the Adirondacks, and the fictional life of Mattie Gokey, a girl who has to balance her love of words and learning with her responsibilities to her dairy farming family. The story bends history very slightly, but the whole thing melds into a seamless narrative.

Mattie also showcases Donnelly's gift with words. She's the kind of author who makes you just want to drink in every single word she says, and reread various passages over and over because they are just so beautiful. This is a style that I long to reach in my own writing - her words are poignant, fluid, pitch-perfect; she can pull the beauty out of tragedy in a way that amazes me.

Seriously, guys, go read Jennifer Donnelly's books. She's also written three historical fiction books for adults, and the next time I get to go to the library, you can bet I'll be hunting those down.

Thursday, June 9, 2011

Editing, Step Two: Research!

I have not yet actually reached Step Two in my editing process (I think I will start this weekend) but here is what I plan to do:

I got three more books on the French Revolution from the library. I'm going to comb through those, the books I already have, and my notes from class, to familiarize myself with the little details that will (hopefully) make this a solid story.

I'm probably irrationally excited about research. I was even able to find a book we'd gotten an excerpt from in class, and that is definitely going to be fun to read. Hopefully it will all go together smoothly!

I also intend to make up a list of Big Picture editing goals, things that I can look for and try to fix as I read through my manuscript. Things like "more and better worldbuilding" and "making sure all the facts line up with the fiction" and "character motivations." Good stuff like that.

How do you guys begin your edits?

Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Behind Stone Walls

Hello, all! It's Tuesday again! Thanks so much for all your lovely comments on last week's posts - they were very interesting and fun to read!

This week's teaser isn't as romantic, unfortunately, but it is the very beginning of the climax. Yep! You guessed it - they're breaking in! Avar has previously ambushed another guard and stolen his uniform, and now they're approaching the gates.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: "Is this a kissing book?"

Why yes. Yes it is.

Thank you guys for dealing with me while I was experiencing the flailing that was the last two weeks. I have lived!! (Well, grades come out tomorrow so we'll see. :P Nah, I think everything went pretty well.)

And so, as a thank you, here is a teaser of everybody's favorite thing. This scene has been Approved by The Roommate, so I suppose it is safe to release it on the world.

Enjoy!!

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Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Childhood Memories

See? I've got a teaser for you this week! And I'm posting it before I go to bed so I won't forget!

So, something I'm thinking about as I come to the end of this book is that Rose's family sort of drives the plot, but as it is right now, you won't actually meet them till the very end. Thus, I'm trying to slip in little snippets like this one, where Rose is thinking about them.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Liberty, Equality, Fraternity or Death

Morning, blogosphere! How is everyone on this fine, rainy morning?

I have a question for you, dear readers, regarding this week's teaser. I'm taking a class on the French Revolution this semester (which is awesome), and that class had a lot to do with what I've written in these couple of paragraphs. What I would very much appreciate is if you would tell me if it's too much of a historical or political info-dump. I'm aware that one thing I need to do big time when I edit this is world-building, but I don't know if something like this would be terribly out of place or not.

Thank you, kind readers! Enjoy!

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Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Stuff of Nightmares

Happy Tuesday, all! Thanks everyone so much for all the lovely comments you've been giving me, they really make my day!

So, today, Rose is hiding under the counter in an abandoned shop that she found. She's a bit miserable.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, April 5, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Recovery

Hello, blogosphere! How have you been? Was your weekend lovely? I do hope so.

This little tease is Rose starting to pick herself up again post-black moment. I will not tell you what happened to make her hit rock bottom (did I mention it's getting really hard not to be spoilery???) but I hope you will enjoy this tidbit.

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Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Reminiscence

Man, it's getting hard to find teasers that aren't chock-full of spoilers...

This is a short while after the last teaser; Rose is sitting in the dark with Avar and pondering. She ponders a lot, but this is actually an instance where her mind drifts to something good, rather than imagining something terrible.

Can you please let me know if the symbolism hammer is beating you about the head? Thanks.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Lost in the Darkness

Hello, all! I wrote a lot over break. A LOT. Just an absurd amount. It was great. Although I am now getting to the point where I have to choose my teasers carefully so as not to be too spoilery. ;)

So, Rose and Avar have nearly been caught red-handed, but they make it back to the tunnels safely and have this conversation.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: A Sweet Repetition

Hi guys! I wrote SO MUCH yesterday. It was fantastic.

So... have some cuteness. Avar has messed something up terribly, hence why he's so upset, and Rose has been trying to cheer him up a bit.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Foolish Plans

Hello, all!

In today's teaser, Rose is returning from an excursion on her own, in which she is attempting to befriend one of the guards at the prison where her family is held, but which she neglected to tell Avar about. He's not too happy.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Tales of the Past

Hello, blogosphere! Did you all survive Valentine's Day okay? Mine was spent writing and watching Pride and Prejudice - pretty good, right?

Also, I apologize for the lack of Thursday's post. I'll have one for this Thursday, I promise!

This is a continuation of a tease I put up a couple weeks ago, in which Vartan is creepy and mean and Avar runs away. I don't think I've given you any insight yet into why there are four werewolves hiding in the old tunnels beneath Paris, but here's a little of that now.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Keys and Coffee Cups

Oh goodness it's early... student brains don't like waking up at 6:30. Or four hours of sleep. Yeah.

So... today's teaser... for my Fiction class we just read The Things They Carried, and we're doing an exercise based on that for Friday. So, here are some of the things that Rose carries. This bit is from right after her family is arrested, and she returns to their home for a few minutes.

Enjoy!

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Also: Let the Words Flow picked my query to critique! Woo!

Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Brothers

So when I woke yesterday, it was -11. -21 with the windchill, apparently.

That's right, I'm back at school! Classes started yesterday, and I think my history class is going to be especially fantastic.

But enough about that. In today's teaser, the wolves are a bit miffed because they think Rose has tried to run away (which they find a bit insulting, since they've been nice to her). She wasn't running away, she was just doing a bit of sleuthing on her own for once.

Also, Avar's brother Vartan is a real jerk. Also really creepy.

I think that covers it... enjoy!

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Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Mindgames

Hi guys! I don't really think this one needs any explanation. It's just an insight to the inner workings of Rose.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: The Tunnel

Hello, all! Happy Tuesday!

Underneath Paris, there are miles and miles of old mining tunnels, about 2km of which are currently open to the public. It's been very tricky to research these, so if you happen to know more about the catacombs than I do, please correct me. But when you're trying to hide a couple of werewolves in the middle of the city, underground is the best place (also the scariest place) to do it.

Rose doesn't think it's such a good idea, though.

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“Are you afraid of the dark, Rose Estienne?” he scoffed.

Rose did not answer; instead, she tried her best to scowl at him. But she knew that her freckled face had turned white at the sight of the small, black space. It loomed up at her, tantalizingly terrifying, calling for her to set foot in the darkness and lose herself there, never to be found again.

She tore her eyes away and looked back at Avar, who chuckled. This time, she found she could scowl at him.

“If you are so frightened, I will go first. Here, hold the grate open – and make sure to close it behind us.”

“Why should I trust you?”

“What choice do you have?”

Without another word, he thrust the grate into her hands and stepped onto the staircase, descending carefully. Rose thought the darkness was slowly swallowing him as he descended, like some enormous beast with its mouth open, waiting to devour them both. She stood frozen, watching, clutching the iron grate with both hands to keep them from trembling. When his head finally vanished from view, she had to remind herself to breathe.

She was alone now. She could choose to follow him into the blackness, or fend for herself on the streets of Paris, out in the open. The dirty streets would be no more accommodating than the tunnels, but it was more likely that the guards would find her, or that someone would recognize her and turn her in. The darkness below beckoned her silently, temptingly. Had she not always longed for an adventure? To escape the lot in life she and her family had been dealt? Now she had the perfect opportunity – she merely had to conquer her deepest fear –

“Rose?” a voice from the darkness called. Avar’s voice.

And she put a foot onto the staircase. Then the other. She followed him into the devouring dark, into the mouth of the monster. And with a soft clang, she closed the grate behind her, sealing off the light.

She froze when she stepped below the level of the sunlight, one foot halfway off the step, her eyes wide and searching to no avail. It was like being suddenly blinded. She kept staring into the infinite blackness, searching for something, anything, that her eyes could latch onto. But there was nothing – no hint of a change in direction ahead, no outline of Avar waiting for her, just blackness. Reaching out to the side, she groped for the wall, desperate for some direction, and for what seemed a worrying amount of time her fingers touched only air. When her fingertips scraped stone, she gave a sigh of relief, realizing that she had been holding her breath.

Tentatively, she took a step downwards, then another. The wall curved slightly, and Rose realized she was on a spiral staircase, looping around endlessly into nothing. The only sounds she could hear – and she was straining her ears nearly as hard as her eyes, hoping that there would be some clue as to what exactly she was getting herself into – was her own pulse thudding in her head with each panicked gulp of the stale air, and a faint sound that was almost like a whistle, but not quite. It sounded like wind, or someone breathing – panting, perhaps.

A thought seized Rose’s throat and made her stop again. What if Avar had transformed? What if he was waiting as a wolf, fangs bared, at the bottom of the step to kill her? Should she run back up? Would he follow her?

“Rose, what are you doing to take so long?”

Rose jumped, only just holding back a scream; it came out as a strangled sort of squeak. In the darkness, his voice sounded very strange – loud, as though it was right in her ear, but she had no way of knowing just how close or far he was.

“C-coming,” she stammered, barely a whisper.

Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Teaser Tuesday: Questions and Answers

Well, it's technically Tuesday, isn't it?

Those of you who read my teases from my last attempt at this story may recognize some of this. The line I've reused is quite possibly my favorite line I've ever written. I just really like the image it gives me.

Avar has just explained what he and his brother and two cousins are doing in Paris; werewolves are being attacked because monsters half out of legend are not exactly in line with the new regime and its ways (ah, the Cult of Reason...). And Rose finds out they have a bit more in common than she might have thought.

A note: if this ever sounds rather less than historical, PLEASE tell me! For some reason I have no problem slipping into the speech patterns of someone from Victorian England, but have rather more trouble replicating an appropriate tone for Revolutionary France.

Enjoy!

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