I do hope this is not utterly awful; I just cobbled it together not five minutes ago. I haven't been able to write for a week now (yay, projects...) and although my dad's suggestion to write a letter to myself explaining why I had no letter for today was quite entertainingly hilarious, I wanted to actually WRITE something before homework consumed me again and my brain exploded.
So, here you go. The first letter written by Emily's best friend, Fiona:
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*snipped*
ooooh, I'm not sure I knew this had any paranormal elements before--cool! Love the old-fashioned feeling of the letter!
ReplyDeleteOuu, and so the plot thickens! Love the voice, as usual, and I couldn't help but notice the speech patterns seemed to seep into your intro. :) *finds old English-like speech patterns infectious*
ReplyDeleteThis is NOT awful missy! I love it! I want to know more about the pendant and the story. I love the fact that it reads old-fashioned. :D
ReplyDeleteI love the language in this. I read it like a letter in a Jane Austen novel, lol, but it was great.
ReplyDeleteHound: Yep. It starts out in a college of magic. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteBecca: You mean you didn't know I talk just like this all the time? ;P
M.J.: Thanks! I'm so glad it's not awful.
Sage: Really? Oh, cool! I love Jane Austen!
I love, love, LOVE the prose! Definitely can tell it's from a different era, and you pull it off masterfully. :D <3
ReplyDeleteI love how your snips start out with the date, it always puts me in the right mind frame. It's very unique, and the writing is on point.
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