Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Teaser Tuesday: New Project?

Hi guys! Haven't done one of these in a while... whoops. I haven't been able to write anything in a loooooong time. Yay sleep deprivation!

But now that I have a little time to myself, and enough time to get some sleep, I've been trying to come up with a new project. It's been tricky, since I've decided I'm abysmal at plot (there will probably be a post about this later) but this is a little piece from one of my options. I wrote most of it before history class yesterday and was very excited to have written something at all.

If I wind up going with this one, I believe I shall call it Shadows on the Stars, after a line in the song/poem that inspired it, which is called Sure on this Shining Night. My roommate's chorus just performed it (that's not them, sadly; they were much better) and I've been rather obsessed with it ever since.

So, without further ado:

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So, what do you think? Is this worth pursuing? Horribly cliched? Just plain weird? Guy pov, what were you thinking Caitlin? Comments and critiques would be most appreciated!!

4 comments:

  1. Definitely worth pursuing. I really, really, REALLY like this. The imagery was great, and well, I like to read male POV. It's refreshing :)

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  2. Oh, I LOVE the atmosphere in this! (And I seem to be saying that a lot about your teasers :) )

    Definitely definitely write more!! <3

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  3. Loved the descriptions, because I was hooked from the first line. I think it would be great if you carried on with it.

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  4. This is beautifully written. I vote that you should write more!

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