Yay for first timers! I don't know what this is about, but it has a sweet, kind of fairy tale feel to it for me so far. I like the obviously caring relationship b/t the two characters.
Really cute dialogue between the two of them. And the "wolfish" grin. Could that mean something... werewolf-like?
*gives cookies for first Teaser Tuesday*Every line on this teaser makes me ask loads of questions. Where are they? Where do they come from? Why did they invade the place? Who chases after them? Love the dialogue between them as well and the name Avar. *nods*
Great first Teaser Tuesday! I love the playful, yet serious dialogue between the two characters. Is this from the novel you describe in your sidebar?
Loved the dialogue. Ha ... love. lol! And congrats on your first teaser tuesday. Today will be my first as well, so you can imagine how nervous I am. I still can't pick a teaser!! You didnt seem to have that trouble, though. Wonderful writing
Love this! Like someone pointed out above, it has a sort of fairy tale feel to it. And it's incredibly sweet!
Happy first Teaser Tuesday! I have to say that you pulled me in with the first line and as I got further into it, I just had to keep reading. I have a million and one questions and I can't wait to see how it pans out. Great snip!
Ah, I knew there was something to that wolfish grin line, then I read the sidebar about your story. I like the dialogue here too, it flows well and brings up a lot of questions. Keep teasing!
Oh, wow! Thanks, everyone!YES the fairytale thing comes across WOOT.As for the wolfish grin - yes, he is a werewolf. This is actually from the sequel to the book mentioned in the side bar - I should probably put something up about that...Lynkay - they are in a tavern in 18th century Rouen. Rose comes from a small village in central France; Avar comes from one on the opposite end of the country from where they are now. They didn't *technically* invade, but they are the newbies there. And just about everyone chases after them. Thanks for all the fantastic comments, guys! :D
Yay! I remember when I was a teaser tuesday newbie...now I'm a teaser tuesday addict...anyway, welcome. :-)And you have good conversational rhythm here. I also picked up on the fairytale-esque thing, and I like it.
Welcome to TT!! :D This flows well, and you have some great dialog going on here! Great job, keep up the good work!
Welcome to Teaser Tuesday!I love the dialogue! And your names are really beautiful.
Yay for your first TT!I do agree that it has a fairytale feel to it. The dialogue was great, and I definitely enjoyed it!