Right. So, methinks that today, I ought to post something from the work that is currently riding the query-go-round and thus driving me absolutely insane.
But I do love it so.
I also love the way they talk to each other. It's such fun. I apologize if this is a bit lengthy for a teaser, though.
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Unladylike Freckles! I like!
ReplyDeleteI love the teasing between them!
ReplyDeleteI love the camaradie between your characters...so cute! :D
ReplyDeleteHEHEHEHEHEHE This made me LOL! Good Job! :D
ReplyDeleteI love them!!! Such teasing. I love the way that they're so at ease with each other. And I loved the last lines of his dialogue.
ReplyDeleteMight be irreverent to some but it made me laugh out loud.
Ha I love this! Love the back and forth between characters also.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys!
ReplyDeleteYup, unladylike freckles. This is 18th century France, after all, where being really pale was like being tan is today.
I hope it's not too irreverent. I don't want that to be the point - it's kind of a "I worship a rock, you worship a guy in a toga. They're both silly - why should there be any problems?" moment. So. :)
aww, I loved the interactions between these two characters. The teasing is so cute <3
ReplyDeleteThe interactions btw the characters was cute and very funny. Hahahaha! Freckles are unladylike. That was the best line for me
ReplyDeleteThis is so cute. The dialogue between the characters are spicy as heck. Yum. More please!
ReplyDeleteThe dialogue is so fabulous in the snip!! I loved it!
ReplyDeletehaha I love the dialogue and this snip in general!
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