Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Teaser Tuesday: Un-rabbited!

In my last tease, Oliver had been turned into a rabbit and was lost somewhere in London. Now, after a whole mess of things happened, he has been retrieved! Fortunately, he was lucky and fast enough to escape the cats and East Enders who wanted to eat him.

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*snip*

11 comments:

  1. Aww I LOVE that last line! <33333

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  2. I love the formality of Oliver's first line (It really is terribly uncomfortable to be a rabbit) that's then followed by a burst of emotion in the last line. Very, very sweet!

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  3. aww! i really like this...my only criticism would be that instead of just telling us that she worked some magic, i'd like to hear more about the spell and ritual involved. But still, excellent tease! :)

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  4. Haha, so Britishly proper. I love him already!
    Just one question though... Was he nekkid when he turned back? <.<

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  5. AWW at the last line, that made me smile lots :)

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  6. Hahaha, I love Oliver (and second Ellen's question ;)) Loved him saying how it's terribly uncomfortable to be a rabbit - awesome :D

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  7. Oh man, a rabbit, how cool. I really like Oliver, he's great!

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  8. NOOOOO, no, he's wearing clothes! Otherwise, I would have mentioned it, because, like you said, these very proper British characters would've had sort of a BIG problem with that.

    So he's got clothes on. Definitely.

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  9. Awww Oliver is such a sweetie, you can tell from just this small snip.. Suppose it's for the best that he was clothed, i think the image would distract me for quite some time if he wasn't

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  10. i am SWOONING. i heart oliver BIG.

    and i LOVE your writing.

    i want this book.

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  11. Leasie: Oliver is pretty adorable. And yeah, clothes are good. :)

    Tahereh: Well, I just finished it, so... fingers crossed!

    Thanks for all the lovely comments, everyone!

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