Hey, guys!
So, as you know, I have finished Letters to Oliver and am not allowing myself to look at it until I start editing it, probably later this week. Also, researching for my werewolf story revision is turning out to be trickier than I had thought (more on that later). Which means that today's teaser comes from another short story I wrote for class last semester. I really like this story a lot, and since I love the characters so much I might turn it into a longer piece later. (Which would mean writing an urban fantasy. What?!?!)
In any case, here 'tis.
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wow i loved this!
ReplyDeletethen again, i love most everything you write. i could TOTALLY see this turning into a novel!!
how exciting!!!
Awwww omg this is awesome , i absolutely love it and if it turns into a novel i'm going to be quite addicted to it :D
ReplyDeleteHahaha, I loved Callie's snark, especially that last line. I remember you mentioning this story before and found the concept intriguing then, but I definitely love the voice and humor in this :D
ReplyDeleteOh,, I love this! Cool concept and great voice :D
ReplyDeleteHaha. I love this. Very cute and i love the last line. I could really see this developing into a novel too - or even a MG story (if you were to change the age of the character). Keep working at it. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the voice and the dialogue between her and Puck! Very fun and I'd keep reading :D
ReplyDeleteI think there's all kinds of possibilities for culture clashes and confrontations in this one, definitely worth you exploring it further. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteBaha! You must write this! You must, you must, you must! :D *loves*
ReplyDeleteTahereh: Glad you liked it! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteAlyce: Hehe... addicted readers, ftw!
Dys: I love snark! I might have to write a contemporary thing one of these days just to have proper snark!
Bri: Thanks! :)
Angie: It is most certainly on the back burner for after my werewolf project. :)
Ellen: Thanks! It was so much fun to write her interaction with Puck.
Angelica: Indeed there are. 'Tis a most exciting idea.
Becca: I will prolly get around to it sooner or later. :)
Thanks, everyone!
This is so cute. I love Puck.
ReplyDeleteVery entertaining. My daughter would adore this book. I agree on the MG expansion. I would only change using portal-thinging three times. Once is really cute, then perhaps Puck could correct her on the second time? Great writing!
ReplyDeleteHaha. This is oozing voice. Very cute. I love how you worked in the setting so effortlessly :)
ReplyDeleteThis is so quirky it made me smile, and I can't stop smiling still. Your writing is spot on, polished and very entertaining. I'd love to read more of this =)
ReplyDeleteSage: Thanks! Puck is such a fun character.
ReplyDeleteRAD: Oh, thanks for pointing that out! That is definitely true.
Nomes: Thank you! I had fun imagining her bedroom.
Bee: Aw, thanks! I'm so glad you like it.
Lol this is really cute and funny and very engaging. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteAwwww... I 3> Puck already- great interaction between the two characters! And I love Callie's sass! :D
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