Happy Tuesday, everyone!
This is from the start of my A Bridge to War (and yes, I'll be keeping that title, at least for now, even though it's more a revolution and not a war...) rewrite. Anyone who was on FNW with me the other night will recognize this (sorry!) but I've been editing more than writing lately, so... there it is.
Hope the dialogue this time around is better!
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I love this! So visual!
ReplyDeleteGreat description! And I love the mental image of the werewolf talking to her. And how she doesn't think herself completely insane for seeing a half-wolfman thing behind her laundry (guessing they're more normal in her world? :) )
ReplyDeleteahahaa, so i forgot about that email and haven't read it yet (surprise!) but this is awesome! seriously. the dialogue, at least this bit, feels fine, perfectly natural, and your descriptions are fantastic as ever.
ReplyDeletethis is quite exciting.
I can totally picture this!!! Nice work!
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone. I love how I can visualize everything! Awesome job! Funny dialogue too :D
ReplyDeleteAmanda: Thanks!
ReplyDeleteEllen: Yep, werewolves are more normal there. :)
Ella: *gasp!* A comment from the elusive Ella! Glad you liked it. :D
Annie: Thank you!
Karla: Yay! Glad you liked the dialogue. :)
Maybe it's because I'm a sucker for werewolves, or maybe because we share the same (awesome) name, or because we're both (dorky) college students, but your writing really pulls me in! I love love love this, and urge you (cue me dropping to my knees in pleading) to continue this!
ReplyDeleteCute. This was fun. I have so many visuals of werewolves to choose from. Can you describe him a little more? Is he classic human with wolfy features? Harry Potter creepy werewolf? Long nose and cuddly werewolf? You got me curious:) good job
ReplyDeleteHeh, I LOL'ed at this. Awesome tease! :D
ReplyDeleteCaitlin: High five for dorky college kids who know how to spell Caitlin properly! Woot!
ReplyDeleteRAD: Thanks! I'll try and get in an Avar appearance bit for next week. :)
Bri: Glad you liked it!