Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Teaser Tuesday: And We're Walking...

This WiP is giving me a headache.

Well, that's not new. It's going on its fourth year of giving me a headache, really.

I think my problem is that I have too many very distinct plots and no way to mesh them as of yet.

I fully intend to figure this out today and then I will start writing this rewrite in earnest.

In the meantime, have some internal monologue while Rose is being marched off to meet more werewolves.




  1. You're gonna get through this, Caitlin! And you are already helping yourself with such a nice snip that conveys the atmosphere very well.

    Good luck :)

  2. I am so sure you'll figure everything out. This is certainly great stuff. Can't wait to read more! :)

  3. I love the feel of this, if that makes sense. It probably doesn't :D

    Your descriptions flow really well in this snip.

  4. Love the description of the forest. I could really feel her tension. Nice snippet!

  5. Bee: Thank you! I'm working on it. :)

    Karla: Thanks!

    MJ: Yes, it does, actually, and I'm glad!

    Angie: Thanks!

  6. Wow, loved the descriptions and the tension! Awesome job with this!

  7. Aaah the dreaded distinct plotlines that won't mesh. Yeah, had that problem too. Don't worry. You'll figure it out. I did. And great tease. Love the tension and the internal dialogue

  8. Oh wow! I loved that little snippet. Your writing has a beautiful flow and the descriptions are great. And don't worry, you'll figure it out. You obviously have a lot of skill. ;)