This WiP is giving me a headache.
Well, that's not new. It's going on its fourth year of giving me a headache, really.
I think my problem is that I have too many very distinct plots and no way to mesh them as of yet.
I fully intend to figure this out today and then I will start writing this rewrite in earnest.
In the meantime, have some internal monologue while Rose is being marched off to meet more werewolves.
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*snipped*
You're gonna get through this, Caitlin! And you are already helping yourself with such a nice snip that conveys the atmosphere very well.
ReplyDeleteGood luck :)
I am so sure you'll figure everything out. This is certainly great stuff. Can't wait to read more! :)
ReplyDeleteI love the feel of this, if that makes sense. It probably doesn't :D
ReplyDeleteYour descriptions flow really well in this snip.
<3
Love the description of the forest. I could really feel her tension. Nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteBee: Thank you! I'm working on it. :)
ReplyDeleteKarla: Thanks!
MJ: Yes, it does, actually, and I'm glad!
Angie: Thanks!
Wow, loved the descriptions and the tension! Awesome job with this!
ReplyDeleteAaah the dreaded distinct plotlines that won't mesh. Yeah, had that problem too. Don't worry. You'll figure it out. I did. And great tease. Love the tension and the internal dialogue
ReplyDeleteOh wow! I loved that little snippet. Your writing has a beautiful flow and the descriptions are great. And don't worry, you'll figure it out. You obviously have a lot of skill. ;)
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