Heh, this reminds me of my (former) hamster. It just escaped somehow (in the house) and I never found it. O_OInteresting rabbit (also caught one of those as a lad), and interesting (and quite thoughtless :D ) girl. Thanks for the teaser.
CJ -- that happened to me once. I had my hamster out and I was playing with him on the floor. He crawled behind something and I waited for him to come out, but if he did I never saw him. Then I had a hamster escape another time (twice, the second time because my mom dropped him after we FINALLY caught him). It took about twenty-four hours, but we eventually got him safely back in his cage. Aw *hugs Emily* It'll be okay. You know exactly who's behind it all, you just need to think a little harder.
The letter is written with so much emotion-- I LOVE IT! I feel really sorry for the MC :( And I hope she finds it!
I really like Emily's voice -- it is very fitting, and consistent throughout. Every time I read one of your teasers, I always want to just read your entire story. <3
I am always fascinated by your teasers. This is probably one of my faves as I can really tell Emily's voice throughout. Love it!
I suppose I ought to clarify that Oliver isn't really a rabbit - he's a person who's been turned into a rabbit - and Emily didn't exactly lose him. She just can't find him.