Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Teaser Tuesday the Third

Since my last two teasers have been of a rather fluffy nature, I decided to shake things up a bit. I mean, I like fluff as much as anybody (aka I am a hopeless romantic and can hardly help myself) but fluff makes up very little of A Bridge to War. So, instead, here is a lovely argument between Bad Guy #2 (at least, he's the second one introduced) and Rosie. Said villain's name is Marcellus Durand, and he's a military captain, though not by choice.

They're in my own AU version of Paris, if anyone was puzzled.

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6 comments:

  1. Love the speech patterns! They sound really authentic and flow beautifully :D And Rosie's got so much spunk! <33

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  2. Agree with the spunk. I love the interaction between them and the historic feel given just by the the dialogue. Very nice.

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  3. Damn! That slap! Man, I wouldn't want to be that bloke, honest. Lovely tease!

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  4. I love me some Rosie! It's such a contrast - sweet name, spicy personality! Love her and the teaser. Great Job!

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  5. Thanks, guys! :)

    It sounds historical? YES. That is my biggest fear with this book.

    He gets her back for that slap, unfortunately... but then she turns it around again.

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  6. Ow I love the snark and the attitude! Niiice. And it definitely sounds historical.

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